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Phineas pounded his fist on his desk. Ferb looked over at him.

"What's wrong?" he asked.

"This is horrible!" Phineas complained.

"What is?"

"My drawing!"

"What?"

"It's horrible."

"Let me see it."

"No!"

Phineas wrapped his arms around the "horrible" piece of art. Ferb went back to his book, while Phineas kept drawing, which he'd been doing for an hour.

About five minutes passed, when a drop of rain hit the window. Both boys looked up, only to see a pouring rain start. Ferb sighed, knowing it would last a while.

Another fifteen minutes passed, when the silence was broken by a loud knock on the door. Ferb rushed downstairs, only to reveal a sopping Isabella.

"Hey, Ferb!" she greeted.

He nodded back, then gestured for her to come in. She came in.

"Where's Phineas?" she asked, breaking the silence.

Ferb led her upstairs. Phineas immediately wrapped his arms protectively around his drawing.

"Whatcha drawin'?" Isabella asked, stepping towards him.

"You wouldn't like it," Phineas said.

"Be serious Phin, I always like your drawings," she assured him.

"It's awful," he said.

He uncovered it just enough for him to peek at it, before hurriedly covering it again. Neither one of them noticed Ferb slip out.

"Come on," Isabella begged, "Let me see it! I promise not to laugh!"

He shook his head. He snapped his sketchbook closed holding it behind his back. She frowned at him.

"Come on, I want to see," she complained.

"Well, if you really want to...No."

She gave him the biggest puppy-dog look she could muster. He stared her straight in the eye, before sighing and opening the sketchbook.

She silently congratulated herself as Phineas flipped through countless pages. Finally coming to the page, he handed it to her.

She gasped.

It was her! Phineas Flynn had drawn her, Isabella!

And it was amazing!

The details, from the stray hairs to the smile, were perfect.

"Phineas," Isabella gasped, "this is beautiful!"

He went scarlet.

"No it's not," he mumbled.

"What are you talking about?"

"It doesn't look anything like you."

"Are you kidding?! This is my twin!"

"Yeah, fraternal."

"No. Identical."

"It has so many mistakes!"

He buried his face in his hands. Isabella pulled them away smiling at him.

"You are such a perfectionist," she sighed.

"Only when it comes to you," he retorted.

She smiled, light pink dusting her cheeks.

Neither of them noticed Ferb, who snuck up between his brother. He pushed Phineas' head forward, until he and Isabella met in a kiss. Both their eyes widened.

Ferb snickered, sneaking back out.

And it was that night, in the middle of a storm, that Phineas and Isabella shared a kiss.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(And Ferb took a picture, using it for things we should not know of. Let's just say, Phineas was very unpleased with his step-brother.)

I always imagined Phineas being a total perfectionist. Don't ask why, I don't even know.
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BatmanWithBunnyEars Featured By Owner May 2, 2014   General Artist
Cute story!  It seems out of character for Phineas (or Ferb) to be down on himself, since they always seem so happy-go-lucky in the show.
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PhoenixKaption Featured By Owner May 2, 2014   Writer
Well, they're a lot older in the story, so I thought with time they would have more emotions like this. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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datscootaloo Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Every time he said it was aweful i said outloud 'OMG ME TOO!' because i'm a drawer and i think most of the things i draw are horrible and people tell me they are awesome or amazing anf I'm just like "I WANT TO RIP MY ART UP AND THROW IT IN A FIRE!"
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PhoenixKaption Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013   Writer
I actually based it off myself. Every time someone tells me something looks/sounds/seems nice, I automatically tell them it's horrible.
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datscootaloo Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
same XD
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CakeShoes Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Perfect music while listening to le Phinbella moment [link] <:'DDD
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PhoenixKaption Featured By Owner May 12, 2013   Writer
Thanks and thanks for the fave!
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YarTavdhladleklwa Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Phineas: Ferb, I'll never forgive you for taking that picture...................PSYCHE (noogies him!)
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CallMeDani Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it!! *0*
How cute!!!
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PhoenixKaption Featured By Owner May 4, 2013   Writer
Thanks
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AmyNChan Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha!! awesome, but does Ferb's picture get posted? XD
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PhoenixKaption Featured By Owner May 4, 2013   Writer
Maybe...
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AmyNChan Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha!! *^_^*
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YxLnightstar Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it!

(It reminds me of a story by Kicsterash though)
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flavia0028 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I agree! But I understand how tricky our subconcious is! ;)
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YxLnightstar Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol I guess so
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PhoenixKaption Featured By Owner May 4, 2013   Writer
Thanks! And sorry if its like someone else's.
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flavia0028 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
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Just so you can see how similar it is. I like both 'cause they're unique in their own way! Yours is more comical. You're a great writer! :D
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PhoenixKaption Featured By Owner May 5, 2013   Writer
Thanks!
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flavia0028 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
No prob! :aww:
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YxLnightstar Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh no don't worry about it!

You don't have to apologize!
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jgui1302 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Student Artist
Cute :3
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PhoenixKaption Featured By Owner May 4, 2013   Writer
Thanks.
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jgui1302 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Student Artist
;)
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